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I provide two different levels of feedback, Notes and Intensive Notes,  as well as a Phone Only Option. All my services include unlimited phone and email support.  They are comprehensive, covering in detail all areas of the craft. The Intensive Notes, however, go into far greater depth.


This service will set you on a solid path for your rewrite. I will explore in detail every aspect of the craft, including premise, plot, character, structure, themes, dialogue, pacing and commercial viability (which of course is always in flux and completely subjective). Nothing will escape scrutiny, and everything is up for grabs.

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Intensive Notes

This service is a granular drilldown into the creative DNA of your material.  Be prepared to examine in exacting (and for some, painful) detail every component of your premise and your execution of it.   Although Intensive represents an Intermediate to Advanced level of interaction, any writer, no matter how advanced or skilled, will benefit from this degree of professional scrutiny.   If the wallet can handle it, it’s the way to go.

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My Writing

Call or email and I’ll be happy to send you a sample of my original TV or feature work